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Old 11-08-2005, 04:36 PM
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nice commercial!...who's the chick
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Old 11-08-2005, 05:04 PM
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Originally Posted by -=GMAN=-
nice commercial!...who's the chick
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It also feature's ( the beautiful ) model Sara Koonar.
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Old 11-08-2005, 05:13 PM
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Not bad, although I think the editing in the commercial could have been a little tighter.

In some of the cut backs to Sara, you could see her looking somewhere else before she decides to look at the camera.
Not a big problem, but all the editor will have to do to fix this, is extend the footage a couple of frames so when Sara is talking, her eyeline trace is directly at the camera.

Just a suggestion, other than that, it's a great idea for --------.
Great stuff
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Old 11-08-2005, 10:52 PM
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i think its good and i second what knox said as well. Usually with things like this they get better with time.
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^^ agreed...

if she wasnt so cute id say cuz keep her voice in the background and jus show images of wat -------- has to offer...
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Originally Posted by LDY KLLA
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nice commercial!...who's the chick
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It also feature's ( the beautiful ) model Sara Koonar.
yeah yeah! lol
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Old 11-09-2005, 12:04 AM
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sarah KOONer...does anyone else find that funny? LOL sick comercial tho!
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Originally Posted by HyBrId
^^ agreed...

if she wasnt so cute id say cuz keep her voice in the background and jus show images of wat -------- has to offer...
Yup - or even if showing her (Im sure you guys want her to be shown in the commercial) she shouldnt be using a hand held mic. Also the editing should be a little tighter but overall it gets the point across. Good job.
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