Teknotik.com web Commercial!
 

Hello Everyone!

-------- is pleased to share with you a short web vid/commercial put together by http://www.advantechstudios.com (Will). It also feature's ( the beautiful ) model Sara Koonar.

You can check Advantech's site for more great vids..and enjoy his latest below! Thanks to both Will and Sara for thier time, effort and hard work on thsi project.

ENJOY!

CLICK HERE--->>>--------.COM COMMERCIAL


Its not for Tv or anything....its just a web commercial ..we are gonna put it up on the site and around the net...that was a first time shoot....just to give a little info about us.

nice commercial!...who's the chick ;)

:p

Not bad, although I think the editing in the commercial could have been a little tighter.

In some of the cut backs to Sara, you could see her looking somewhere else before she decides to look at the camera.
Not a big problem, but all the editor will have to do to fix this, is extend the footage a couple of frames so when Sara is talking, her eyeline trace is directly at the camera.

Just a suggestion, other than that, it's a great idea for --------.
Great stuff :)

i think its good and i second what knox said as well. Usually with things like this they get better with time.

^^ agreed...

if she wasnt so cute id say cuz keep her voice in the background and jus show images of wat -------- has to offer...

yeah yeah! lol :lol:

sarah KOONer...does anyone else find that funny? LOL sick comercial tho!

Yup - or even if showing her (Im sure you guys want her to be shown in the commercial) she shouldnt be using a hand held mic. Also the editing should be a little tighter but overall it gets the point across. Good job.